New Idea

I'll still update the vlogitty vlog (I promise I will get the next vid up soon...) but I'm now going to use this channel for some of my writing I did/still do. I'm not exactly looking for any feedback on this blog (though if there are things you can suggest I would be more than happy to listen through other mediums). However, if you like a particular piece, a "Cool" or "Rad man" would be appreciated (and in case you were wondering, yes, I used "Rad" ironically).

So for my first piece, I will start with something I wrote on the train from Vienna to Venice a few months ago.

Is your father a thief?

Do you care
if it’s Orion or
one of the Dippers?
It was something
you were looking for. Her
or she or something close-
by invisibly replies:

“No,” she says. “It was you,”
she says. “You put them there
remember?” Not her father.
You and your love blinded her.
And the night has never been the same.